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[cullina]

Please use this topic to post the problems you find in-game.

 

Don´t forget to check the Section Rules so you know how to do this properly   

 

Thank you! 

[Herodes]

I cannot provide a screen since I'm already playing without the ads. But when you never have bought donuts you can click away the ads next to the game frame. Beneath the ad on the right appears a text for all non buyers that reads like the following: "Please consider displaying ads because we need monies ... " What always caught my attention was the phrase, that "buyers play ad free off course". My suggestion is to change it into "of course" if you don't want to imply I'm playing off the track now.

[RedSpinner]

I found 2 minor grammatical errors.

 

The first is found in the help screen for League Fights.  The fourth sentence reads, "If you drop below a certain a number of league points, you drop into a lower league."  The second "a" doesn't need to be there, and the sentence should read, "If you drop below a certain number of league points, you drop into a lower league."  See image below.

 

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The second error is found in one of the fighting mission descriptions with hacker Hugo in Sillycon Valley.  The second sentence reads, "Her son is starring the whole time at the monitor looking for the 'Error in the system'."  The word "starring" meaning to add stars to, should be replaced with the word "staring" which means to look at intently.  See image below.

 

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[RedSpinner]

One more minor grammatical error.

 

In one of the Siegfried & Boy fighting missions in Gamble City, the second sentence of the mission successful screen reads, "It becomes to embarrassing for both of them to drag a buzz kill up on stage."  The preposition "to" should be replaced with the adverb "too," which emphasizes how embarrassing it is.  The new sentence should read "It becomes too embarrassing for both of them to drag a buzz kill up on stage."  See screenshot below.

 

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Edited by RedSpinner, 03 September 2018 - 12:23 PM.

[RedSpinner]

Maybe I need to stop reading so much. 

 

The last sentence in one of the Elvis-double fighting missions in Gamble City reads, "Every since he is a rich man!"  The word "Every" should be replaced with the word "Ever" and I think "is" should be replaced with "has become", resulting in the sentence, "Ever since he has become a rich man!"  See screenshot.

 

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